Poem by Humans

Independence Day—
I let him touch
a little bit of me

Frogpond XXV:I: Fay Aoyagi

Poems by Original program

A frosty sky

A river struggles of the sun

Liquid bitter waterfall

My Poem by altered program

The icy breeze slid

A playful torrid breeze fell

Through a clear forest.

I changed the whole structure of form one.

I took all the nouns, adjectives and verbs out and put just winter words in. My husband guessed immediately which was my poem because the other ones didn’t make sense to him and the words in my poem seemed to be words I would use in a poem.